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waleedhussain

Councller (250+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

wow ! Modern Enlightenment & Roshan khiyali !
 

Waseem

Moderator
Staff member
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

K, excuse the naiveness but I am unaware of the Jalali and Jamali story ?? Any volunteers ??

Jalali means :angry_smile: n Jamali means :)
 

rajakhanmd

Senator (1k+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

@Wanderer:

Thanks. I got an idea about your take on this issue.

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تقدیر شکن قوّت باقی ہے ابھی اس میں
نادان جسے کھتے ہیں تقدیر کا زندانی
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ترے سینے میں طوفاں کیوں نہیں ہے
خودی تیری مسلماں کیوں نہیں ہے
عبث ہے شکوہ اے تقدیرے یزداں
تو خود تقدیرے یزداں کیوں نہیں ہے

I am not confident about your Urdu after your question about Jalali and Jamali but hopefully you will figure them out.
 

wanderer

Siasat.pk - Blogger
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

@Wanderer:

Thanks. I got an idea about your take on this issue.

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تقدیر شکن قوّت باقی ہے ابھی اس میں
نادان جسے کھتے ہیں تقدیر کا زندانی
..........................................................................

ترے سینے میں طوفاں کیوں نہیں ہے
خودی تیری مسلماں کیوں نہیں ہے
عبث ہے شکوہ اے تقدیرے یزداں
تو خود تقدیرے یزداں کیوں نہیں ہے

I am not confident about your Urdu after your question about Jalali and Jamali but hopefully you will figure them out.

wouldnt it be better if u just gave me the explanation.
 

rajakhanmd

Senator (1k+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

@Wanderer:

Oh no, giving you an explanation is no fun at all. You should find out yourself.

( Asal main, mujhay khud be en ka meaning nhein aataa to .........)
 

canadian

Chief Minister (5k+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

@Wanderer:

Thanks. I got an idea about your take on this is

تقدیر شکن قوّت باقی ہے ابھی اس میں
نادان جسے کھتے ہیں تقدیر کا زندانی
..........................................................................

ترے سینے میں طوفاں کیوں نہیں ہے
خودی تیری مسلماں کیوں نہیں ہے
عبث ہے شکوہ اے تقدیرے یزداں
تو خود تقدیرے یزداں کیوں نہیں ہے
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I am not confident about your Urdu after your question about Jalali and Jamali but hopefully you will figure them out.

Bahut accha Kaha.baghair Matlab Key Hi shairi Kartey Ho ? Kamal Key Shair Ho !!!
 

canadian

Chief Minister (5k+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

@Wanderer:

Oh no, giving you an explanation is no fun at all. You should find out yourself.

( Asal main, mujhay khud be en ka meaning nhein aataa to .........)

bahut Aacha kaha Bhai.Matlab Key baghair hi shairi kartey ho !! Ajeeb Shair ho.
 

rajakhanmd

Senator (1k+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

Canadian:

For some reason, mujhay her zamaney main log shair bananey pay musir nazar aatey hain. Jebkay Allah SWT kay shuker say meray saath to koi hadsaa be nhein howa.

Yeh to Iqbal, the great ka Kalaam ka aik random sample hai. Ab main nay yahaa.N pay aap logoo.N say share ker dia hai, METBAL eska khud talaash krain.

Lekin choo.N kay aap nay meray ander murrey hoey shair ko lalkaara hai, to phir ab shakayat nhein keejiey ga.

''
Yeh keshtee hai sahil khoee hoee

Sahil Ka Khona Kia Maanee

Jeb menzil beech sumandar ho

Sahil ka hoona kia maanee

Menzil dhondhtey aakhir log, sahil tek aa jatey hain

hum apni menzil aey logo, beech bhenwar banatay hain ''
 
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canadian

Chief Minister (5k+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

Canadian:

For some reason, mujhay her zamaney main log shair bananey pay musir nazar aatey hain. Jebkay Allah SWT kay shuker say meray saath to koi hadsaa be nhein howa.

Yeh to Iqbal, the great ka Kalaam ka aik random sample hai. Ab main nay yahaa.N pay aap logoo.N say share ker dia hai, METBAL eska khud talaash krain.

Lekin choo.N kay aap nay meray ander murrey hoey shair ko lalkaara hai, to phir ab shakayat nhein keejiey ga.

''
Yeh keshtee hai sahil khoee hoee

Sahil Ka Khona Kia Maanee

Jeb menzil beech sumandar ho

Sahil ka hoona kia maanee

Menzil dhondhtey aakhir log, sahil tek aa jatey hain

hum apni menzil aey logo, beech bhenwar banatay hain ''

waisy agar shairi khud karo to Matlab Zaroor hona Chaihey chahay woh Kitna He khafeef ho warna aamad nahin hotey.
 

rajakhanmd

Senator (1k+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

Thank you for the tip.

Main aapko correction kay liey chend namoonay bhejna start ker daita hoo.N.

''
meri zindage ke sansai.N you tamam ho rhee hain

Hain yeh akhree jo shamai.N teray naam ho rhee hain
 

wanderer

Siasat.pk - Blogger
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

Thank you for the tip.

Main aapko correction kay liey chend namoonay bhejna start ker daita hoo.N.

''
meri zindage ke sansai.N you tamam ho rhee hain

Hain yeh akhree jo shamai.N teray naam ho rhee hain

shairi tohbuss wohi kertay hain jinhay ati hai....aur woh jin kay saath sadness huie hooo....
 

rajakhanmd

Senator (1k+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

@Wanderer:

Waisey aap ka Urdu zubaan pey uboor mandarjazail jumley say roz e roshan ke trah ayaa.N ker dia hai.

.aur woh jin kay saath sadness huie hooo....

Thanks to ALLAH SWT, meray sath koi ''sadness'' nhein hoee. Esee liey main shairee nhein kerta.

So any luck with the meanings so far?
 

canadian

Chief Minister (5k+ posts)
Re: I'd Like To Be A Ninja Champion Or Ballet Dancer By: Sabrina Pasha !!!

@Wanderer:

Waisey aap ka Urdu zubaan pey uboor mandarjazail jumley say roz e roshan ke trah ayaa.N ker dia hai.

.aur woh jin kay saath sadness huie hooo....

Thanks to ALLAH SWT, meray sath koi ''sadness'' nhein hoee. Esee liey main shairee nhein kerta.

So any luck with the meanings so far?

Khush naseeb wo nahi jis ka naseeb acha hai,
Balke khush naseeb wo hai jo apne naseeb par khush hai....

 

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