dear even my dad born here. and i can speak urdu cause i had a urdu subject and we moved to pakistan for 10 years but again came back. and noone ever told me i have a terrible english even my girlfriend is english she never told me my english is poor.Don't take it as a personal insult or anything but did you just move to the UK ? Because your English is pretty terrible, typical current govt college style.
Well now that you are in the UK, hope it will get better now.
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