اسے نئی قسمیں کھانے سے کون روک سکتا ہے

[abbasiali]

 

[omerkashmiri]

نہ بجلی ہے نہ پانی ہے مگر پھر بھی
عباسی بھائی کو شعر سنانے سے بھلا کون روک سکتا ہے

 

[aqeel813]

@abbasiali @GeoG @pak4rule @Adeel @jalalamardan @moazzamniaz @omerkashmiri

I apologize in advance because i m not an expert but I cant help myself saying that this piece of poetry is very immature. Needs a lot of effort to balance it. I mean this one is poetry for the sake of poetry only. wazan boht unbalanced hai aur sirf shair jodnay ki koshish ki gai ha aur kuch nahin.

sorry because I donot like such criticism myself, but....

 

[abbasiali]

@abbasiali @GeoG @pak4rule @Adeel @jalalamardan @moazzamniaz @omerkashmiri

I apologize in advance because i m not an expert but I cant help myself saying that this piece of poetry is very immature. Needs a lot of effort to balance it. I mean this one is poetry for the sake of poetry only. wazan boht unbalanced hai aur sirf shair jodnay ki koshish ki gai ha aur kuch nahin.

sorry because I donot like such criticism myself, but....

برادر عقیل

یہاں اصل میں ساری محنت ڈیزائن میں لگی ہے، یہ میری قسمت کہ شاعری کا کوئی سر پیر نہیں لگا آپ کو،

آپ کے فیڈ بیک کا بہت بہت شکریہ

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[aqeel813]

برادر عقیل

یہاں اصل میں ساری محنت ڈیزائن میں لگی ہے، یہ میری قسمت کہ شاعری کا کوئی سر پیر نہیں لگا آپ کو،

آپ کے فیڈ بیک کا بہت بہت شکریہ

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Well!! That was actually a very nice effort then.. I can see your name on the bottom.. Its really a good work. But as far as the poetry is concerned, this one does not go down my throat.. :)

 

[abbasiali]

Well!! That was actually a very nice effort then.. I can see your name on the bottom.. Its really a good work. But as far as the poetry is concerned, this one does not go down my throat.. :)

Chalein kuch to paisey wasool huwey, waisey ek kaam ho sakta hai, mujhey urdu text main apni pasand ki poetry bhijiyey main us to design key saath post kardoun gaa.............Deal............;););)

 

[aqeel813]

Chalein kuch to paisey wasool huwey, waisey ek kaam ho sakta hai, mujhey urdu text main apni pasand ki poetry bhijiyey main us to design key saath post kardoun gaa.............Deal............;););)

Deal.. I will send you real soon. :)

 

[abbasiali]

Deal.. I will send you real soon. :)

Thanksssssssssssssss

 

[Adeel]

Poet [MENTION=10206]abbasiali[/MENTION] since when?

 

[GraanG2]

Poet @abbasiali since when?

[MENTION=10206]abbasiali[/MENTION]
Kuch toh mamla garr barr hai bhai.Aaj kal kuch zyada hi shayiri ho rahi hai.lolz

 

[sarakhan28]

@abbasiali

Bohat Khub aur b ghazalain share karain.App ka taste bohat acha hy:)

 

[abbasiali]

Poet @abbasiali since when?

@abbasiali
Kuch toh mamla garr barr hai bhai.Aaj kal kuch zyada hi shayiri ho rahi hai.lolz

Jub sey merey piaroun ko mera andaz e siasat napasand huwa hai

tub sey hi is rah e farar main farar dhondni shuroe kr di hai

(cry)(cry)(cry):):):)

 

[Salik]

Chalein kuch to paisey wasool huwey, waisey ek kaam ho sakta hai, mujhey urdu text main apni pasand ki poetry bhijiyey main us to design key saath post kardoun gaa.............Deal............;););)

یہ تو اچھی بات ہے عباسی بھائی۔۔۔

یہ عاجز اپنا كلام ہی آپكی نظر كرتا ہے۔۔۔۔

واضح رہے كہ یہ عارفانہ كلام ہے۔۔۔ اس كے ساتھ كوئی خاتون نہ چپكا دیجئے گا۔۔

 

[Salik]

Jub sey merey piaroun ko mera andaz e siasat napasand huwa hai

tub sey hi is rah e farar main farar dhondni shuroe kr di hai

(cry)(cry)(cry):):):)

سیاست نے تو دماغ كی دہی بنا دی ہے۔۔۔۔

میں نے بھی آجكل دوسری مصروفیات ڈھونڈنی شروع كر دی ہیں۔۔۔

 

[abbasiali]

سیاست نے تو دماغ كی دہی بنا دی ہے۔۔۔۔

میں نے بھی آجكل دوسری مصروفیات ڈھونڈنی شروع كر دی ہیں۔۔۔

Try photoshop, Kelk, Urdu in-page, very useful tools........initially I had some challenges, but Alhamdulilah.........it is going fine.

 

[Salik]

Try photoshop, Kelk, Urdu in-page, very useful tools........initially I had some challenges, but Alhamdulilah.........it is going fine.

I know inpage and little bit abt photoshop...

What is kelk??