dasht e sitam

[wamz4]

salam,
I wrote this nazm last night. hopefully it will have some effect on atleast one person. i understand that it might be too negitive in most of yours opinion but the truth is that i did not intend to write all this, at the time you are writing you never what you are writing, i think it just presents a true picture of what we have become. I do not claim to be a poet, I am not even near that status, its just the way i find easy to express myself and reach others. If it makes even one Pakistani Muslims think I will consider my efforts paid off.
Allah hafiz.

 

[R Bhatti]

Well written bro but now u have to do one thing......Ur absolutely right that we cant ignore all this and to be honest nobody does but now I want you to write another poem....and tell us about all the positive things U see in his country......I liked the effort...try and write a reply to this poem.....I'm sure you'll produce something nice.

 

[Guest]

aslamualkium
First of all brother its very hopeless and it's not true that this is all our country has, we agree that we have bad times, but we don't let our enemies succed and we never let them burn our cities and our country and those who wish to do this we will bury them alive soon inshAllah and plz as a pakistani brother I request u try and write something positve coz we have so many positve things in Pakistan also not just bad, we have to make ppl positve and give them hope, make them ready for revolution and nothing will happen to Pakistan it will stay untill the day of judgement inshAllah no one will leave Pakistan ever, not any true paki, only our enemies we will rid+
Pakistan from them ,
Hope in the future and belief in the possibility of revolution are inextricably linked. Belief in the possibility of revolutionary change is the key to the belief that human beings have the capacity to create a human world
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